Thursday 5 April 2018

Compo Writing





For LP: testing for setting, character, tenses
I heard voices along the 
corridor. Who could they be? Mr Tan and his family were away on a holiday. shocked. To my horror, I saw two scary burglars prying my neighbour's window open!




MP: use of descriptive language
Burglars! shivering like a leaf! I must inform my parents immediately. Though I was horrified, I tiptoed to the room and rushed my parents. I told softly as I did not want the burglars to know they were discovered. “Quick, Dad! Call the police!”



click -> Write the ending

HP: writing a creative ending
My parents called the police. The burglars tried to escape but were caught by the police.I felt proud of myself. The police complimented me.